July 6 2015

Learned sumtin new

https://m.youtube.com/channel/UCsooa4yRKGN_zEE8iknghZA

 

Personal notes of what I got out of it… (i sucage at der grammer)

 

 

 

BOTH STAND ALONE BECAUSE THEY ARE NOT RELATED

I am hungry.

I see a chair outside.

OR…

I am hungry;

I see a sandwich outside.

 

 

 

 

RULE… You will almost never see a semicolon positioned before a coordinating conjunction such as…

“and, but, for, nor, or, so, yet”

This is where commas go **

But a semicolon can replace a conjunction to shorten a sentence.

July 5 2015

Daddy daddy daddy daddy daddy daddy daddy

The preceding has been brought to me (and you) by my four-year-old son who can’t seem to let me have any more than fifteen seconds of thought at any one moment before feeling needing to interrupt me.

Admission:

I was married prior to now for ten years and didn’t have any kids. In retrospect, I had no idea the amount of time I had at my disposal and squandered. I love my kids, but I wish I would have known the full extent of the draining these buggers would end up costing me.

At the very least my goals for the day are laundry and cleaning up some of digital life. Since it doesn’t involve that much deep thought I can get away with doing it in brain drained mode.

DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY DADDY

 

Does copy/paste count worlds my daily word count?

I so want to say yes

 

 

July 5 2015

July 2014 (moar cleanup)

So in surfing the interwebs I came across a story on www.WritersDigest.com that I am going to steal. It was written by Zachary Petit and can be found here.

Sarcasm: Everybody copies and pastes. Plagiarists just get caught. – Me

I went looking for a funny picture to throw on this page but realized that whatever I found would also be technically stealing so I had to come up with the above quote off of the top of my head. I swear it wasn’t copied.  Now I did get the phrase “interwebs” from Stephen Colbert a number of years ago who, if I remember correctly, was paraphrasing the late senator Ted Stevens from Alaska. Where Ted got it from… who knows?


You write a book four times.

When you’ve finished the fourth writing, you’re done—or at least ready to show your manuscript to an agent or editor.

Here, briefly, is how that process works:

1. The Close-In Writing
The basic method: You write a day’s worth of work (either fiction or nonfiction)—whatever that means for you. Next day, before you write anything new, you revise and edit the previous day’s work. This is the “close-in writing,” and becomes the first draft—the first time your write your book.

2. The Close-In Edit
When the entire first draft is complete, you go back through and, beginning with word one to the end, you revise and edit the entire manuscript on your computer. This is the “close-in edit,” and becomes your second draft: the second time you write your book.

3. The Distance (or “Hand”) Edit
Next, you print a hard copy of the second draft of your entire manuscript. Beginning with word one to the end, you hand-edit the hard copy, scrawling notes and profanities to yourself all the way through the margins. Then, using your hand-edit notes as a reference, you go back into your computer file and revise the manuscript as needed. This is the “distance edit,” and becomes your third draft: the third time you’ve written your book.

4. The Oral Edit
Finally, you print a new hard copy and read your entire manuscript aloud. Read it to the walls, to your spouse, to the patrons at Starbucks, to your dog, to the bowl of soggy Cocoa Puffs left over from breakfast. Doesn’t matter who’s in the room, only that you can hear yourself reading it. Start with word one and don’t stop until you read the last word. Yes, it may take you several days, but that’s OK. Keep reading every word out loud until you’re done.

Write your book four times.

Then it should be ready.

 

July 5 2015

July 2014 *

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(I had originally created the following thought on one of my static pages. Today, July 2015, I am trying to clean up my site some and going to convert it to a post instead of it being a static page)

/2015

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2014 >

Just thought of this…

Writing is Vulnerability – When you write you are in effect exposing the twisted little thoughts you have to the outside world, assuming you share them of course. Your inner thoughts are now vulnerable and naked, hanging out there so others can smirk and ridicule should they desire to do so. I equate this feeling to the dream we have all had at some point in our lives, the going to school naked dream. Humans, are by our very nature, vulnerable and afraid. Writing is just the mental form of being naked.

Editing is Hard (at least to me) – Editing is the act of going to the gym and trying to tone that naked flabby body up some. Some people spend all of their time in the gym looking to achieve the perfect “Generic Muscle Term Here”. Some people don’t know how to work these muscles and can end up causing more damage than good as they scrape entire chapters because it “just doesn’t feel right anymore”. You need to develop a better sense of overall story health and not get stuck on one part. In truth, Editing is (overall) Refinement (and still hard).

Now once you get a better understanding of the first two ideas above, hopefully, you will never need to learn the last Idea.

Perfection is an Illusion (a.k.a.) Perfection is the enemy of getting things done (&/Or) Good enough often is.

 

July 4 2015

New Friends (As of June 13th – Yes late post)

So today as part of my in-person writing group I met a couple of new people and learned that they each had a blog and decided to share them here. I also included the blog of an existing member only now realizing that he had one.

Ray – https://www.tumblr.com/register/follow/rayriddle1

Justin – https://jzinmanblog.wordpress.com/

Tom – http://twogeeksoneblog.com/

 

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July 4th, In getting back to my comic con review I realized I had forgotten to hit ‘Publish’ on this article as well. My bad.

 

 

July 4 2015

Sacramento Wizard Comic Con — The review (2 weeks late)

Where to begin…

The event took place during June 19-21 and cost $50. This was also my convention so I didn’t have any point of reference to compare it to.

As soon as I got there I wandered the floor to see the various merchants and costume outfits by the other attendees.

After giving the floor two passes I found myself a presentation listing and found three that interested me. These being; the heroine’s journey, the reality of Superman’s powers, and what makes a good villain?

The first one was primarily hosted by ___(To Be Populated Later)____ and then afterwards during the Q&A Valerie Estelle Frankel came up and joined her. As of me writing this I can’t seem to find my notes as to her name so “blank” is going to have to cover it.

She went over the ‘The Heroine’s Journey’ and how it differs from the male version of The Hero’s Journey. I tried to get some notes in but when listening to a presentation my own annotation skills are lacking. I walked up to __(to be populated later)__ and asked if she could email out her notes. I have yet to receive it, but I have to acknowledge that people are busy. Heck, I can’t even get my own regular posts up on this site.

The next one was the Powers of Superman. It was hosted by Mary Louise Davie. I stopped by her booth and purchased one of her books before I had even looked at the itinerary to know she was doing the Superman one. I have the book sitting beside me at work and have yet to start reading it, but that is just me being life busy.

Finally the last panel, “Why we love good bad guys”, was hosted by Dr. Travis Langley, Danny Fingeroth, Elizabeth Ann Kus, and Robert Love. I probably enjoyed this one the most but also felt as if they enjoyed listening to each other talk more than interacting with the audience. Hey, I get it, some people really like looking in the mirror. Kanye Pest or Parris Hilton anyone?

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It is now July 4th and I haven’t received any contact back by the aforementioned people above after contacting them by email. I haven’t posted this review until now as it has existed in draft form only and I’m getting tired of seeing it incomplete.

So…that means I am posting it in all its incomplete form.

At some point every button needs to get pushed.

 

 

July 2 2015

Chp 27(23) – 2nd draft done :)

This now puts me at 27 of 38? (23 of 34 original chapters) done.

The chapter originally came in at 1,700 words and now sits at 2,600.

EEK!

My overall word total is now 88,000 or 17,000 higher than my first draft.

I was shooting to try and keep it under 90,000 but once the second draft is done I can look into slimming it back down depending on the editorial responses I get back.