The tone is a bit darker in this draft which I kind of like. At least I better like it because it’s my story.

I got an extra 1100 words in this morning 🙂

It’s only a few hundred words but it wasn’t feeling right so I rewrote it one more time. I feel much better about it now. It is the introduction of my main villain and so wanted it to show him off in all his primalness.

Outline/1st draft Vs 2nd/knowing draft.

It’s funny just how much a story gets tweaked along the way in a 2nd draft knowing where I’m going from having written the explosive first diarrhea draft.

Hey I got another 1500 words cleaned up.

Okay so I just finished the 2nd draft of the entirety of day 1 of my Nanowrimo project. The overall wc is 4200 and I broke that into 2 chapters. It still has to be spellchecker a bit that requires resources I just don’t have on the train.

Good start to my Friday
🙂

So far I am 2500 words into my rewrite as of the train ride in today.

Yippie

Of that 1600 words is chapter 1 which puts me about 800+ words into chapter 2. I’m thinking of posting chapter 1 here when I get more time to do such a thing.

TIME – the one great evil of a finite life 🙁

UPDATE: I did. I did! I managed to post chapter 1 in all its nausous glory. You can read it here.

I managed to get 850 words into my second draft of Sup-Her but aside from that I’ve had a rather crazy day.

Not going to go into it because its 10pm right now and I just want to go to bed.

-(That’s what she said)

So I did a little tweaking of my PK story and did a total word count and came up with 50,200.

NaNoCopyMo? This wasn’t supposed to be a NaNo effort so WTF!?!?!? Granted today is March 22 and I think I started my story on like January 28th or something so my monthly total was around 25k a month but still. Ending up at 50k at the end is kind of funny and sad at the same time.

Now…

Now that I finally got that story worked out of my system….

Now that I finally got that story worked out of my system what do I work on next?

Notice I’m stalling here.

No…

Never, just evaluating my life choices in the span of the seconds it takes to type all this out.

Nagger is what I need to be to myself

Soooo….

So I know I need to clean up a different story but the mind (yes my mind) is wanting to look at something else sparkly. Stupid mind.

Stupid mind.

SQUIRREL!

Sup-Her is what I am going to work on. I know it’s the most practical and realistic but I just don’t want to yet.

(S)imagination is so much more fun. I love first drafts.

Simply put I’m stalling.

Silly me, success is for people who can focus long enough to see something through to completion!

(S)cereal commercial is what I sound like.

Stop stalling and get started Dave.

Sex…sorry in between the SQUIRRELS I sometimes have thoughts of boobies and

Stuff…

Sexy Squirrels?

So gross.

Spork?

Sporn? Squirrel Porn?

Okay, I am going to start working on draft 2 of Sup-Her…after I fart around and let my mind wander a bit and have even more fun than it’s already having.

Do Squirrels spoon after having sex?

Is sporking like spooning only it takes place in the middle of the action?