Mr. Kobayashi (2nd+ draft) & Pondering…
Still working on cleaning this monster up.
I have posted all of my first draft chapters on the forum of my online writing group and so far they have reviewed up to 16 of the entire 33 chapters. Of these I have been cleaning them up, just finished chapter 4, and have been resubmitting these second drafts to my in-person writing group. With the in person group they are a bit slower and are currently working on chapter 1. When I get these back and clean these up I will consider this to be my third draft. Eventually when I have this all cleaned up I will compile the whole thing and do maybe start sending it out or just submit it to amazon? I might do both. Haven’t fully weighed the pros and cons. I am also thinking of submitting to publishers with a mix of the 3rd draft beginning and a second draft later half. Of course I would flag where the split takes place.
Pondering….