So I’ve been able to sneak a bit of time these past few days into getting my chunk 23 ready for the September submission. I cleaned up a good portion of it in order to… make it seem better good-er-er? I can’t actually say it’s better but it seems better, at least to me. I think I had given away too much of the mystery for what is yet to come. The solution is steam line gutting it.

I then allowed myself a small break and brought up chunk 35, which is where I last left off and coincidentally, also in need of a fourth pass because I had ignored an entire plot thread involving one of the characters. I took one glance at it and closed it right back up again. Shheessshhh. I ain’t got that kind of time right now. I have to pack things up in about a half hour and go pick up the wife from the dentist. She is getting some work done and is being put under. I have a feeling I’ll be spending much of the rest of the day playing sexy nurse or some freak version of that with my hairy out-of-shape body. She’s a lucky gal. Past that I’ve got to go and pick up all the kids and deal with all their errands too.

Yeah… fun times.

My brain is only so limited in what it can hold into it with having to stop, pack up, do a bunch of miscellaneous chores, and then try to dive back into a fictional world where things are being subtly carried throughout the book. It doesn’t work like that.

Oh well…

That’s it for now.

Tootles all

😛