Ughh…

It’s that time again.

I’m reviewing one of my peer’s stories.

To put it mildly… the assium is strong in this one.

I know, you might be thinking “What is assium?”

It is as it sounds.

The creation of a stories world that is pulled straight out of a person’s ASSium.

I’m tired of this stuff.

It’s almost like they are taking the dartboard approach to things and throwing them together regardless of how they might fit.

For instance, the nights in this world are AT LEAST 14 hours long. 14-hour nights, while it’s SUMMER, would require the place to be far north or south of the equator region. Any place this displaced wouldn’t have the kind of favorable weather to grow crops. Did I forget to mention the hero comes from a farming community? Okay, I did now. Happy?

It’s almost like me saying I eat over seven hundred pounds of food a day and decide to go on a week long backpacking with nothing more than a waist pouch to hold a few energy bars.

STOP DOING THIS PEOPLES

Stop using your assium to move the story forward without substantiating it.

Handwavium to the extreme.

uugghhhh…

That is all…

My bitching is over.

For now.

😛

Tootles.