Okay, so this chapter is around 80% new which meant I did lots of deleting.

I did about 1,200 today which brings this ‘original Nano days’ re-working to 5,400. It has several scene splits in it which will be mixed around into various chapters depending on the timeline cleanup and overall flow.

There is more I can add but I’m not going to do it. I need to get to the ‘Punch-Line’ and stop trying to dallying around so much.

I am now at the last little bit of original story.