So I’m adding in some supplimental story info and hadn’t realized it until 600 words in that I got myself into a story logic trap. I’m now going to have to sacrifice what I have and write something different. I’m trying to address the logic falicy while also keeping my characters consistent.

Instead of an Amish apple farm I think I’m going to use a new jersey chop shop as my fifth stop. That way it’s not just one and done with the logic. Don’t worry this all makes sense in my squirrel.