Okay, so I wrote out a chapter of a story in as quick a way as possible. I then rewrote that same chapter hoping to fill in on the brevity I had put in on the first version. I have emailed this out to several people INTENTIONALLY not informing them as to which version came first to get an honest sense of what they thought between the two.

It’s been a mixed bag. So far with 4 people reporting back it’s been an even split. I am currently working on expanding my pool some to get a better sense of where a divide might lie but with so few people utilized so far it’s kind of aggravating.

GGGGRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!***

* is the shorter version – Sup-Her – Me Version

** is the longer version – Sup-Her – Myself Version

*** is me being aggravated

**** = I’m a smartass

I’m going to attach the two version here in hopes that anybody wanting to read these ugly bastards might help me out. My email address is (NO SPACES) The Write Dave (at) gmail (dot) com. Keep in mind today is the 7th of January 2016 so if you are reading this at some point some weeks from now it probably won’t do me a whole lot of good as I will have moved on to another piece of senseless drama in my pathetic writing life.

Thanks and Tootles for now…

Dave