Huh..?

So I’m currently cleaning up day 1 of my NaNoWriMo piece. Day 1 had about 1800 words in all with it being broken into two parts being 530 words and 1270 words. Well, I cleaned up the part 1 of it and it went from 530 words to just over 1,300. Just today I got back around to working on the second part and halfway through that I was already around 1,700 words.

Here is a breakdown for math challenged individuals…

Day 1 – Part 1 originally 530 words…now 1,300 words

Day 1 – Part 2 originally 650 words…now 1,700 words

Day 1 – Part 3 originally 650 words…pending me getting to.

So if you take what I’ve done of day 1 it’s nearly tripled in overall length. Damn!

Once I have day 1 finished I am going to parse it out to a few people and ask them to read them both in a blind study. I am going to see what they say in comparing the two against each other. Am I putting in too much junk or is it needed?

[Mr Burns Intertwining fingers] Release the draft hounds!